Dear K. Jureepron:
Why are you focusing on teenagers? You'll need to explain that in your introduction or your essay will make no sense.
Also, you had better show me SOLID RESEARCH (not some garbage from a make-up company) on the connection between make-up and self-confidence, make-up and concentration, and make-up and relaxation or you have no essay.
What does "reinforce personality" mean? What is "the sorrow?" Are you saying that if a teenager girl's mother dies, the girl can put on make-up and suddenly be happy? What kind of nonsense is this?
Show me the proof by Friday, or you'll get a zero and lose 10 points.
Good luck,
Paul
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> From: junejureepron@hotmail.com
> Date: Tue, 25 Feb 2014 19:49:16 +0700
> To: paul_utcc@outlook.com
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> Make up is good for teenagers because it develops self confident,make up is a hobby can help reinforce personality and it will make them feel relax because when them make up will have concentration and forget about the sorrow.
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