-This sounds interesting, but we would like you to choose a broad topic for semester 1 and then a more narrow/focused topic in semester 2. Can I suggest you talk about ‘Adolescent pregnancy’ this semester and maybe ‘Adolescent pregnancy in Thailand’ next semester?
-Regarding the sub-topics you have chosen, it looks like you have just copied-and-pasted these from Mr. Athiwat’s outline (you and he both misspelt the same words). Please don’t copy Mr. Athiwat again. You are supposed to be submitting your own work.
-Can you please prepare your outline again, this time doing it yourself and choosing sub-topics that are relevant to your chosen topic of adolescent pregnancy? You can identify these by reading about adolescent pregnancy in secondary and tertiary sources (ie. books, websites, and review articles).