1)Writing style cannot be changed from the original one sent from Japan PR team. (I attached original one and the one you sent me)
2)For the comments from director, they cannot put in Japanese version and English version, because they don't have time for official translation anymore, but they don't mind putting on the Thai version.
The description regarding student number, primary --> secondary, and"
how many times a week....." part will be changed as you requested.
Could you check for us and accept above requests for us?
The new title will be sent in a moment.
Thank you so much for your support.