That's interesting and I think I understand the story. However it seems like one chapter in a much longer story... like chapter 1 or 2 in a 20 chapter story. You need to keep writing your story.
That's interesting and I think I understand the story. However it seems like one chapter in a much longer story... like chapter 1 or 2 in a 20 chapter story. You need to keep writing your story.Look forward to hearing more.....