Seriously, every time get my essay back, it looks like the teacher cut his/her hand and bled all over the paper. They keep telling me that I need to redo this entire paragraph or something is not clear and that I need to write more when I've explained everything I could about the topic. Also, my essays are so short, which is why I'm constantly getting failing grades for my English classes. I can never think of anything to write about to make the essay longer and it's very frustrating (Now I kinda feel what its like to have a short little dong). And for the essays I've gotten A's on, the teachers grading them were serious goofs (In a good way because they liked to have fun with the students). I've already failed two English classes to date and I'm pretty sure the same thing is going to happen to the current one which is Advanced Composition and Literature, so I'm hoping that McDonald's will still accept me (No, I am not the typical Asian, I'm very stupid actually). On the other hand, there are students that get excellent grades on their essays like it's nothing. Is this problem correctable?