Your project is complete except for specific information from chefs who work at a hotel or restaurant that you are interested in. The writing is good. However, the writing is marketing writing. I was able to find almost all of the text you have included on the Internet. The interview that you include with Chef "Jonatha" comes largely form a interview published online at myfootpath.com. It is fine to include information from the Internet, but, to get a high grade, you must communicate with someone who works as a chef and find positive and negative information about the job. You must include that information in your report to get a grade of B or more. At this time, you report will give you a C+. You can resubmit it with additional information.