Don't let anybody tell you that you can't write like how you are (unless it's grammar). It's your story, your book, your writing; don't let anyone tell you otherwise. However, that doesn't mean you shouldn't be open to suggestion, although you don't necessarily have to take the advice unless you agree.
Try to avoid sentences like "Sarah McBride didn't want to be a dancer." Have the character's name introduced, such as through dialog. And try to introduce the main idea through details and explanations.
Add detail; without it, the book may seem like a long short story or fanfiction.
Don't let anybody tell you that you can't write like how you are (unless it's grammar). It's your story, your book, your writing; don't let anyone tell you otherwise. However, that doesn't mean you shouldn't be open to suggestion, although you don't necessarily have to take the advice unless you agree. Try to avoid sentences like "Sarah McBride didn't want to be a dancer." Have the character's name introduced, such as through dialog. And try to introduce the main idea through details and explanations. Add detail; without it, the book may seem like a long short story or fanfiction.
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