In both the ‘Orientation’ class (18th August 2016) and the feedback you were given on your outline (2nd September 2016), you were asked to choose a broad topic for semester 1 and then a more narrow/focused topic in semester 2. ‘Adolescent pregnancy in Thailand’ is too narrow a topic for semester 1. Please talk about ‘Adolescent pregnancy’ instead (i.e. adolescent pregnancy around the world, not just in Thailand).