Looks great! There are just a couple things I would like you to change if you dont mind.
First of all, I uh.. am not sure what that hole in her tights is for?
I think you should remove it OR, even better,
cover it up with her cloak. Also,
I think you should make her lean on her saber instead of biting it.
And make her breasts a little bigger Sorry if I sound picky.
Will pay you as much as you require!