Peer 1:
Oh, I can’t believe it. Your essay was full of grammatical mistakes and there was no introduction at all. Besides, I’m not sure I agree with the second point you made. You should try to be positive. You ended your essay with a nice conclusion, though. I quite enjoyed reading it. Oh, there were also tenses and spelling problems. There are some words/phrases that I did not understand. Well, your essay was not too bad after all.
Peer 2:
I’m confused. I didn’t quite understand what you were saying. What ideas were you actually proposing? I was completely lost.
Peer 3:
Quite good I think. The answers were well put together, and the ideas were logical, clear, and easy to follow. You made some good points and I agree with most of them. I liked the way you provided evidence to support your main point. Most of the ideas were good, but I think the last point you made needs to be supported with better evidence. I think your essay would have been more complete if you had added a conclusion at the end. Better proofreading was also needed to help improve your work as there were still some careless mistakes—spelling, grammar, and punctuation. I look forward to reading your work again.
Peer 1: Oh, I can’t believe it. Your essay was full of grammatical mistakes and there was no introduction at all. Besides, I’m not sure I agree with the second point you made. You should try to be positive. You ended your essay with a nice conclusion, though. I quite enjoyed reading it. Oh, there were also tenses and spelling problems. There are some words/phrases that I did not understand. Well, your essay was not too bad after all. Peer 2:I’m confused. I didn’t quite understand what you were saying. What ideas were you actually proposing? I was completely lost. Peer 3:Quite good I think. The answers were well put together, and the ideas were logical, clear, and easy to follow. You made some good points and I agree with most of them. I liked the way you provided evidence to support your main point. Most of the ideas were good, but I think the last point you made needs to be supported with better evidence. I think your essay would have been more complete if you had added a conclusion at the end. Better proofreading was also needed to help improve your work as there were still some careless mistakes—spelling, grammar, and punctuation. I look forward to reading your work again.
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