As always, she's wonderful.
And art-wise there's nothing I can think of that stands out as something you need to improve on, I imagine there is stuff that I, as a non-artist, can't spot, but from my perspective you're great. Now, commissions-wise you could stand to work on your english a little, particularly your grammar. It's passable, but there's times where trying to correct your grammar leads to a few possible things you could be asking, all of which are equally likely, which means I have to ask you to clarify and it slows the whole process down.