Different Attitudes towards Campus Love
Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that college students develop campus love. Just as each coin has two sides, campus love has its advantages and disadvantages. As a result, different people have different attitudes towards campus love.
Some people argue against campus love for it may pose a bad effect on college students’ studies. They maintain that college students’ main task is also the study as the same as it was in high schools. However, it takes lots of time for the lovers to date, wandering along the byways on campus. The other reason they hold is that campus love will also cost much money when they have dinner together in a restaurant or for some other additional expenses.
However, other people hold the opinion that campus love is allowed. They regard it as a stimulus for students have a plentiful, pleasant life during their college time. When students enter a college, they are faced with a different life from the one in our former school. College students have much more spare time and they may not know how to manage time effectively. Campus love, to some extent, can make the two lovers’ experience unforgettable moments. It will be much better if they both focus on their study and learn from each other.
People think about the campus love from different perspectives. Students should balance the negative and positive effects of the campus love. Only if they develop campus love properly can they gain a lot from it.
The teacher’s comments and suggestions:
This is an excellent essay by means of classification. The purpose is clear and the organization is good. In the first part you give out the thesis statement and in the body part you give out the proper topic sentences at the very beginning of each paragraph. The two opinions are explained clearly and logically. And you make a nice and natural conclusion. Thank you for your hard work.
Different Attitudes towards Campus LoveNowadays, it is a common phenomenon that college students develop campus love. Just as each coin has two sides, campus love has its advantages and disadvantages. As a result, different people have different attitudes towards campus love.Some people argue against campus love for it may pose a bad effect on college students’ studies. They maintain that college students’ main task is also the study as the same as it was in high schools. However, it takes lots of time for the lovers to date, wandering along the byways on campus. The other reason they hold is that campus love will also cost much money when they have dinner together in a restaurant or for some other additional expenses.However, other people hold the opinion that campus love is allowed. They regard it as a stimulus for students have a plentiful, pleasant life during their college time. When students enter a college, they are faced with a different life from the one in our former school. College students have much more spare time and they may not know how to manage time effectively. Campus love, to some extent, can make the two lovers’ experience unforgettable moments. It will be much better if they both focus on their study and learn from each other.People think about the campus love from different perspectives. Students should balance the negative and positive effects of the campus love. Only if they develop campus love properly can they gain a lot from it. The teacher’s comments and suggestions:This is an excellent essay by means of classification. The purpose is clear and the organization is good. In the first part you give out the thesis statement and in the body part you give out the proper topic sentences at the very beginning of each paragraph. The two opinions are explained clearly and logically. And you make a nice and natural conclusion. Thank you for your hard work.
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