CONTROL GROUP GB108Written byMike C

CONTROL GROUP GB108
Written by
Mike Corkle
Draft 1 (3/25/2012) Copyright 2012. [e-mail]
US registration # TXu 1-836-147 Ph. 310-424-5506
EXT. OUTER SPACE 1 1
A large freighter space ship lumbers through space. This is
not a shiny vessel; this is a working-man’s ship. The
exterior has been well maintained, but its age and countless
miles are starting to show.
The ship is flying away from Earth and towards Mars.
NEWSCASTER (O.S.)
The world’s largest arms and
technology conglomerate, United
Earth Aerospace Corporation, is
under scrutiny again for refusing
international inspection teams
access to their secretive research
facility on Mars.
INT. LUCY’S ROOM 2 2
LUCY, 24, a very petite and attractive young woman, is
sitting on the edge of her bunk lacing up her shoes.
She is wearing a pair of warn, grease-stained coveralls that
fit her properly, but seem more suited for a blue collar man
than a young, beautiful woman.
Her tiny room is a mess, with bits and pieces of various
machine parts scattered everywhere. On the wall is a screen
playing a news broadcast.
NEWSCASTER (V.O.)
UEA claims that since the facility
is privately owned, it’s not
subject to the same inspections as
the International Martian Base; and
it is only protecting its
proprietary technologies by
refusing the invasive inspections.
This announcement was made on the
heels of UEA’s unveiling of the
first working prototype of their
long-awaited plasma rifle, which
was developed at their martian
facility.
The news is showing video footage of a man in a lab coat
operating a fancy gun.
Lucy stands and looks in the mirror as she ties her hair back
into a pony tail.
LUCY
(to herself)
Frickin’ UEA.
She turns the screen off.
Next, Lucy puts a small chain around her neck. It holds her
“comm device.” She activates it and talks into the device.
LUCY (CONT’D)
(into comm device)
Hey, Ryan. My nap time’s over. I’m
back on duty.
RYAN (O.S.)
Copy that, Lucy.
INT. LOUNGE 3 3
The crew’s lounge is a medium-sized room. There are a few
couches and tables, and a small kitchen in one corner. A
foosball table and an entertainment center are in the other
corner.
A fat man sits at a table eating. STAN, 40-something, is
dressed in grubby workman’s clothes.
Lucy enters.
STAN
Hey, Lucy.
LUCY
Hey Stan.
STAN
Lucy, the hydraulics on my loader
still ain’t working right. I
thought you were gonna fix it. I
can’t unload cargo if that puppy
ain’t 100%.
LUCY
Relax, Stan. We just passed the
halfway point. We won’t be to Mars
for another three weeks. I’ll get
to it.
STAN
Yeah, yeah.
Stan resumes eating.
2.
INT. HALLWAY OUTSIDE POD ROOM 4 4
A man slips into the hall quickly and closes the door behind
him.
JAMES, 28, is a man of average stature and appearance. Based
on his complexion and the bags under his eyes, he looks like
he hasn’t seen the sun or slept for about a decade.
He’s dressed more formally than Lucy or Stan.
LUCY (O.S.)
Hey, James.
James is startled. He didn’t see her coming.
JAMES
Oh, Lucy. Ah, how are you?
James has a laminated badge clipped to his shirt that reads,
“DIERKING, JAMES. Laboratory Technician.” On the badge is
also the United Earth Aerospace “UEA” logo.
LUCY
Are you sure you can’t show me what
you guys have behind that door?
JAMES
Oh, Lucy, you know if I could, I
would tell you, but UEA is paranoid
about their proprietary stuff, and--
stuff.
Lucy sees James is carrying a small video camera in his hand.
LUCY
What’s with the camera.
James quickly pockets the camera and starts to sweat a bit.
JAMES
Oh, ah, it’s nothing. I just record
some stuff sometimes for my own
personal stuff.
LUCY
Like a video diary or something?
JAMES
More like a video journal.
LUCY
...and stuff?
3.
JAMES
Yeah. And stuff.
James turns his back towards Lucy to check the door he’s
protecting and makes sure it’s locked.
JAMES (CONT’D)
Hey, ah, Lucy, I know you’re busy
working on the ship and all, but I
was thinking, you know, maybe when
you have some time, sometime, you
and I could, maybe play some
foosball or something.
Lucy isn’t really listening. She’s looking down the hall at
RYAN and DR. STAMOS, who are arguing. She can’t hear what
they are saying.
After a few moments the men go their separate ways.
Lucy heads down the hall towards them.
James is still talking, facing the door.
JAMES (CONT’D)
... Or watch a movie...
He turns back around to discover he is now alone in the hall,
talking to himself.
INT. BRIDGE 5 5
The bridge of this ship isn’t super sleek. It’s more
functional than flashy, designed so a team of two or three
people can pilot the ship and do all administrative tasks.
There are three small work stations, with keyboards and
monitors arranged in a U shape. There are a few small, shared
screens on the walls that can display a variety of
information.
RYAN, 38, has a regular build and looks somewhat athletic.
He is sitting at his work station console when Lucy enters
the bridge.
LUCY
What were you and Stamos arguing
about?
RYAN
What? Nothing.
LUCY
It didn’t look like nothing.
4.
Ryan isn’t going to have this conversation. He changes the
subject to keep the mood light.
RYAN
Is Stan still bitching about his
loader?
Lucy starts to work on her console, pressing buttons and
flipping through diagnostic information screens.
LUCY
He’s fine. Don’t worry about...
Hey. Why are the short-range
sensors offline?
Ryan starts to work at his console, pressing buttons.
RYAN
I don’t know. They shouldn’t be.
He punches a few more buttons.
RYAN (CONT’D)
There.
An alarm immediately goes off. Red lights are flashing.
RYAN (CONT’D)
What the hell.
The screen on Lucy’s console reads “Meteor Detected.
Collision Corse.”
LUCY
A Meteor? Is this for real?
Ryan’s screen reads “Impact in 3...2...”
RYAN
I don’t--
CRASH! BANG! CRASH!
CUT TO:
BLACK 6 6
CUT TO:
5.
INT. POD ROOM 7 7
WALTER, 30, lies on the floor. Dried blood from a head wound
is on his face. He slowly opens his eyes and looks around the
room. He has no idea where he is.
The small room is dark; only emergency lights are on. There
are six pods, each large enough to hold a human, along the
walls. There is also a small safe, chest high, with a laptop
on top. The laptop is off.
Even in the dim light it’s easy to tell the room has been
jostled about violently.
Walter slowly gets up. He has no shirt or pants on. He looks
around the room, seeing it for the first time. He notices
there are numbers and barcodes written on the doors of the
pods. They are numbered GB108-1 through GB108-6. All the pods
have been broken open and are empty.
He touches one of the barcodes with his hand. What does it
mean?
He sees a door leading out of the room. It’s wide open.
INT. HALLWAY OUTSIDE POD ROOM 8 8
Walter sticks his head into the hallway. It’s long, narrow,
and darker than the pod room.
This is the hallway where Lucy was talking with James
earlier. However, now only a few emergency lights are on.
The hall is deserted and quiet. Walter can hear faint hisses
from leaky valves and the dripping of leaking pipes that line
the halls.
For Walter, nothing is familiar here.
He looks left, then right, then left again. He arbitrarily
chooses “right” and heads down the hall.
He shivers as he slowly moves down the unfamiliar hallway. He
notices a small door that is slightly ajar.
He enters.
INT. SMALL BATHROOM 9 9
It’s a small bathroom. It has a few cabinets, a sink, and a
toilet. This room is also dark.
6.
Walter immediately starts searching the bathroom. He finds a
FLASHLIGHT which can extend into a small lantern.
He turns it on, looking around the room. He sees his
reflection in the mirror. He is surprised to see his
injuries.
Walter converts the flashlight to “lantern mode” and sets it
on the sink. He finds a small hand towel and turns on the
faucet. The water is barely trickling out.
He wets the small towel and starts to clean himself up. He
notices a small tattoo on his neck, below his left ear.
It’s a barcode and the number GB108-5. He has never seen it
before.
WALTER
What the...?
Walter notices another door on the opposite wall. It leads to
INT. CREWMAN’S BEDROOM 10 10
He starts to search the place. The room seems unused and is
mostly empty. He finds a set of clothes and shoes that fit
him. He finds nothing else useful in the room, so he heads
back to
INT. HALLWAY OUTSIDE POD ROOM 11 11
Walter continues down the hall, now dressed and armed with a
flashlight.
WALTER
Hello?
There is no reply from the darkness.
WALTER (CONT’D)
Hello? Is anyone there?
SLIP! Walter almost falls down, but catches himself. He
regains his footing and pans his flashlight down.
A pile of bloody entrails is illuminated.
WALTER (CONT’D)
HOLY!
Walter jumps back. Then takes a second look. He sees a small
photo I.D. badge. It reads “Dr. Franklin Stamos.”
7.
Next to the name is a photo of the doctor and the “UEA:
United Earth Aerospace Corp.” logo.
WALTER (CONT’D)
UEA Corporation?
CRASH! A large metal crash rings out, followed by a ROAR. Not
an animal roar, but not human either.
The noise comes from beyond the darkness behind Walter.
After being still for a moment he continues on. He walks
quietly now.
He doesn’t get too far before he hears a little metallic
TAPPING. This noise is more curious than scary.
He turns a corner in the hall and sees a blue, flickering
light bouncing off the walls in the distance. He turns off
his flashlight and moves towards the noise and light.
As he gets closer he sees a MAN and WOMAN. The woman is
welding something on the wall. The man is leaning next to her
and scanning the darkness with his flashlight. He’s on high
alert.
The woman is Lucy. Her coveralls are dirtier now. Her hair is
messy, and her face is dirty.
The man is Ryan. He, too, is in a more dishevelled state and
has a bloody bandage around one of his legs.
Walter is nearly to them.
WALTER (CONT’D)
Hello?
The two are startled and attack Walter, pinning him to the
ground.
LUCY
Who are you?
WALTER
What?
RYAN
Where did you come from?
WALTER
Hu

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กลุ่มควบคุม GB108เขียนโดยไมค์ Corkleร่าง 1 (3/25/2012) ลิขสิทธิ์ 2012 [e-mail]สหรัฐอเมริกาลงทะเบียน#1-836-147 TXu Ph. 310-424-5506ต่อพื้นที่ภายนอก 1 1Lumbers เรือพื้นที่ freighter ขนาดใหญ่ผ่านพื้นที่ นี่คือไม่เงาเรือ นี่คือเรือทำงานชาย ที่ภายนอกได้ถูกรักษา แต่อายุความ และนับไม่ถ้วนไมล์จะเริ่มแสดงเรือจะบิน จากโลก และ สู่ดาวอังคารNEWSCASTER (O.S.)แผ่นดินที่ใหญ่ที่สุดในโลก และเทคโนโลยีหินกรวดมน สหรัฐบริษัทการบินและอวกาศโลก เป็นภายใต้ scrutiny อีกครั้งสำหรับการปฏิเสธทีมตรวจสอบนานาชาติเข้าถึงงานวิจัยของพวกเขาความลับสิ่งอำนวยความสะดวกบนดาวอังคารห้องพักของดอกเบี้ยลูซี่ 2 2ลูซี่ 24 ขนาดเล็กมาก และน่าสนใจสาว ถูกนั่งอยู่บนขอบของเฟเธอ lacing ค่ารองเท้าของเธอเธอสวมใส่คู่ของเตือน จาระบีสีปกที่พอดีเธออย่างถูกต้อง แต่ดูเหมือนเหมาะมากสำหรับคนคอสีน้ำเงินกว่าหญิงสาว สวยงามห้องพักของเธอเล็กเป็นระเบียบ บิตและชิ้นส่วนต่าง ๆชิ้นส่วนเครื่องกระจายอยู่ทุกที่ บนผนังจะมีหน้าจอเล่นออกอากาศข่าวNEWSCASTER (V.O.)วรวัจน์อ้างที่ตั้งแต่สถานที่เป็นเจ้าของ ไม่ให้ตรวจสอบเดียวกันเป็นฐานบนดาวอังคารระหว่างประเทศ และมันป้องกันเท่านั้นเทคโนโลยีที่เป็นกรรมสิทธิ์โดยปฏิเสธเพื่อรุกรานประกาศนี้ได้ทำการของวรวัจน์ของฯ ของการต้นแบบการทำงานครั้งแรกของพวกเขารอคอยยาวนานพลาสม่าไรเฟิล ซึ่งได้รับการพัฒนาที่ของดาวอังคารสิ่งอำนวยความสะดวกข่าวจะแสดงวิดีโอของชายในเสื้อคลุมปฏิบัติการทำปืนแฟนซีลูซี่ยืน และดูในกระจกเธอผูกผมกลับเป็นหางม้าลูซี่(กับตัวเอง)Frickin' วรวัจน์เธอปิดหน้าจอถัดไป ลูซี่ทำให้ห่วงโซ่เล็ก ๆ รอบคอของเธอ จะเก็บเธอ"สารอุปกรณ์" เธอเรียกมัน และพูดลงในอุปกรณ์ลูซี่ (CONT จะ)(เป็นสารอุปกรณ์)เฮ้ Ryan ฉันนับเวลาของการ ผมกลับสู่หน้าที่ไรอัน (O.S.)คัดลอกที่ ลูซี่เลานจ์ของดอกเบี้ย 3 3เลานจ์ของเรือเป็นห้องขนาดกลาง มีกี่โซฟา และตาราง และห้องครัวขนาดเล็กในมุมหนึ่ง Aตาราง foosball และเป็นศูนย์กลางความบันเทิงอยู่ในอื่น ๆมุมชายอ้วนอยู่ที่ตารางการกิน สแตน 40- บางสิ่งบางอย่างแต่งตัวในเสื้อผ้ารำทำเลลูซี่ป้อนสแตนเฮ้ ลูซี่ลูซี่เฮ้ สแตนสแตนลูซี่ ไฮดรอลิกับโหลดของฉันยัง ain't ทำงานขวา ฉันคิดว่า คุณจะแก้ไข ฉันไม่สามารถยกเลิกการโหลดสินค้าถ้าว่าลูกสุนัขain't 100%ลูซี่ผ่อนคลาย สแตน เราผ่านการจุดอยู่ตรงกลาง เราจะไม่ไปดาวอังคารสำหรับอีกสามสัปดาห์ ฉันจะได้รับจะสแตนใช่ ใช่สแตนเริ่มรับประทานอาหาร2ห้องโถงของดอกเบี้ยนอก POD ห้อง 4คนจัดส่งเข้าไปในห้องโถงอย่างรวดเร็ว และปิดประตูด้านหลังเขาเจมส์ 28 เป็นชายรูปร่างเฉลี่ยและลักษณะ ตามถุงใต้ตาและผิวของเขา เขาหน้าเหมือนเขาไม่เห็นดวงอาทิตย์ หรือแหล่งสำหรับเกี่ยวกับทศวรรษเขาได้แต่งตัวได้อย่างเป็นกิจจะลักษณะกว่าลูซี่สแตนLUCY (O.S.)Hey, James.James is startled. He didn’t see her coming.JAMESOh, Lucy. Ah, how are you?James has a laminated badge clipped to his shirt that reads,“DIERKING, JAMES. Laboratory Technician.” On the badge isalso the United Earth Aerospace “UEA” logo.LUCYAre you sure you can’t show me whatyou guys have behind that door?JAMESOh, Lucy, you know if I could, Iwould tell you, but UEA is paranoidabout their proprietary stuff, and--stuff.Lucy sees James is carrying a small video camera in his hand.LUCYWhat’s with the camera.James quickly pockets the camera and starts to sweat a bit.JAMESOh, ah, it’s nothing. I just recordsome stuff sometimes for my ownpersonal stuff.LUCYLike a video diary or something?JAMESMore like a video journal.LUCY...and stuff?3.JAMESYeah. And stuff.James turns his back towards Lucy to check the door he’sprotecting and makes sure it’s locked.JAMES (CONT’D)Hey, ah, Lucy, I know you’re busyworking on the ship and all, but Iwas thinking, you know, maybe whenyou have some time, sometime, youand I could, maybe play somefoosball or something.Lucy isn’t really listening. She’s looking down the hall atRYAN and DR. STAMOS, who are arguing. She can’t hear whatthey are saying.After a few moments the men go their separate ways.Lucy heads down the hall towards them.James is still talking, facing the door.JAMES (CONT’D)... Or watch a movie...He turns back around to discover he is now alone in the hall,talking to himself.INT. BRIDGE 5 5The bridge of this ship isn’t super sleek. It’s morefunctional than flashy, designed so a team of two or threepeople can pilot the ship and do all administrative tasks.There are three small work stations, with keyboards andmonitors arranged in a U shape. There are a few small, sharedscreens on the walls that can display a variety ofinformation.RYAN, 38, has a regular build and looks somewhat athletic.He is sitting at his work station console when Lucy entersthe bridge.LUCYWhat were you and Stamos arguingabout?RYANWhat? Nothing.LUCYIt didn’t look like nothing.4.Ryan isn’t going to have this conversation. He changes thesubject to keep the mood light.RYANIs Stan still bitching about hisloader?Lucy starts to work on her console, pressing buttons andflipping through diagnostic information screens.LUCYHe’s fine. Don’t worry about...Hey. Why are the short-rangesensors offline?Ryan starts to work at his console, pressing buttons.RYANI don’t know. They shouldn’t be.He punches a few more buttons.RYAN (CONT’D)There.An alarm immediately goes off. Red lights are flashing.RYAN (CONT’D)What the hell.The screen on Lucy’s console reads “Meteor Detected.Collision Corse.”LUCYA Meteor? Is this for real?Ryan’s screen reads “Impact in 3...2...”RYANI don’t--CRASH! BANG! CRASH!CUT TO:BLACK 6 6CUT TO:5.INT. POD ROOM 7 7WALTER, 30, lies on the floor. Dried blood from a head woundis on his face. He slowly opens his eyes and looks around theroom. He has no idea where he is.The small room is dark; only emergency lights are on. Thereare six pods, each large enough to hold a human, along thewalls. There is also a small safe, chest high, with a laptopon top. The laptop is off.Even in the dim light it’s easy to tell the room has beenjostled about violently.Walter slowly gets up. He has no shirt or pants on. He looksaround the room, seeing it for the first time. He noticesthere are numbers and barcodes written on the doors of thepods. They are numbered GB108-1 through GB108-6. All the podshave been broken open and are empty.He touches one of the barcodes with his hand. What does itmean?He sees a door leading out of the room. It’s wide open.INT. HALLWAY OUTSIDE POD ROOM 8 8Walter sticks his head into the hallway. It’s long, narrow,and darker than the pod room.This is the hallway where Lucy was talking with Jamesearlier. However, now only a few emergency lights are on.The hall is deserted and quiet. Walter can hear faint hissesfrom leaky valves and the dripping of leaking pipes that linethe halls.For Walter, nothing is familiar here.He looks left, then right, then left again. He arbitrarilychooses “right” and heads down the hall.He shivers as he slowly moves down the unfamiliar hallway. Henotices a small door that is slightly ajar.He enters.INT. SMALL BATHROOM 9 9It’s a small bathroom. It has a few cabinets, a sink, and atoilet. This room is also dark.6.Walter immediately starts searching the bathroom. He finds aFLASHLIGHT which can extend into a small lantern.He turns it on, looking around the room. He sees hisreflection in the mirror. He is surprised to see hisinjuries.Walter converts the flashlight to “lantern mode” and sets iton the sink. He finds a small hand towel and turns on thefaucet. The water is barely trickling out.He wets the small towel and starts to clean himself up. Henotices a small tattoo on his neck, below his left ear.It’s a barcode and the number GB108-5. He has never seen itbefore.WALTERWhat the...?Walter notices another door on the opposite wall. It leads toINT. CREWMAN’S BEDROOM 10 10He starts to search the place. The room seems unused and ismostly empty. He finds a set of clothes and shoes that fithim. He finds nothing else useful in the room, so he headsback toINT. HALLWAY OUTSIDE POD ROOM 11 11Walter continues down the hall, now dressed and armed with aflashlight.WALTERHello?There is no reply from the darkness.WALTER (CONT’D)Hello? Is anyone there?SLIP! Walter almost falls down, but catches himself. Heregains his footing and pans his flashlight down.A pile of bloody entrails is illuminated.WALTER (CONT’D)HOLY!Walter jumps back. Then takes a second look. He sees a smallphoto I.D. badge. It reads “Dr. Franklin Stamos.”
7.
Next to the name is a photo of the doctor and the “UEA:
United Earth Aerospace Corp.” logo.
WALTER (CONT’D)
UEA Corporation?
CRASH! A large metal crash rings out, followed by a ROAR. Not
an animal roar, but not human either.
The noise comes from beyond the darkness behind Walter.
After being still for a moment he continues on. He walks
quietly now.
He doesn’t get too far before he hears a little metallic
TAPPING. This noise is more curious than scary.
He turns a corner in the hall and sees a blue, flickering
light bouncing off the walls in the distance. He turns off
his flashlight and moves towards the noise and light.
As he gets closer he sees a MAN and WOMAN. The woman is
welding something on the wall. The man is leaning next to her
and scanning the darkness with his flashlight. He’s on high
alert.
The woman is Lucy. Her coveralls are dirtier now. Her hair is
messy, and her face is dirty.
The man is Ryan. He, too, is in a more dishevelled state and
has a bloody bandage around one of his legs.
Walter is nearly to them.
WALTER (CONT’D)
Hello?
The two are startled and attack Walter, pinning him to the
ground.
LUCY
Who are you?
WALTER
What?
RYAN
Where did you come from?
WALTER
Hu

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ของศูนย์วิจัยลับบนดาวอังคาร พยาบาลพื้นที่ 2 ห้อง 2
ลูซี่ ลูซี่ , 24 , และน่าสนใจมาก Petite ผู้หญิงคือ
นั่งอยู่บนขอบเตียงของนางปักรองเท้าของเธอ .
เธอสวมคู่ของเตือน จารบีเปื้อนเสื้อคลุมที่
พอดีเธออย่างถูกต้อง แต่ดูเหมือนจะเหมาะกับผู้ชายมากกว่าผู้หญิง
ปลอกคอสีฟ้าสวยหนุ่ม .
ห้องของเธอเล็ก ๆ จะวุ่นวาย กับบิตและชิ้นส่วนของชิ้นส่วน
เครื่องจักรต่าง ๆ กระจัดกระจาย บนผนังเป็นหน้าจอ
เล่นข่าวออกอากาศ .

( v.o. ) ผู้ประกาศข่าวuea อ้างว่าตั้งแต่โรงงาน
เป็นของเอกชน ไม่ใช่เรื่องการตรวจสอบเดียวกัน


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