Introduction
Hook: Stop doing nothing as soon as other people are looking down on you.
Thesis: The factors that I decide to improve my English skills are people’s insults, the surrounding environment and the importance of the English language.
Body Paragraphs
Topic sentence 1: People always look down on me, even my mother a girl who I love the most.
Topic sentence 2: There are many intellectual men around me who have an influence that force me to enhance myself.
Topic sentence 3: Last but importantly, the English language is extensively used around the world, including working, or studying.
Conclusion
Concluding sentence: To sum up, the people’s insults, the surrounding environment and the importance of English are the three factors that contribute to the self-improvement of the English language. Even if, I am not good at English, yet it is better than the past.