GOOD STORY. THIS IS VERY EXCITING, BUT JUST MAKE SURE THAT IT TAKES YOU 4-5 MINUTES TO TELL. MAKE SURE THAT YOU HAVE A
LESSON LEARNED. FEELING BAD AND THANKING YOUR MOM IS IMPORTANT, BUT WHAT DID YOU LEARN FROM THIS EVENT?
IF YOU NEED TO MAKE THE STORY LONGER, CONSIDER TALKING MORE ABOUT THE DRIVE WITH YOUR MOM. HOW DID IT START OUT? WERE YOU SCARED? MAKE SURE THE AUDIENCE FEELS WHAT YOU FELT!
BUT GOOD JOB AND GOOD LUCK!