Ning, attached is the paper as best I was able to edit it. The sections highlighted in yellow need further revision as I was uncertain as to the specifics of your intended meaning. You'll notice these sections are almost exclusively involving the instructions of assembly. Given that these sections are incredibly and necessarily specific, I was unable to edit them without seeing myself how the innovation is actually assembled. Please go over these sections again. If need be, you may need to schedule an appointment with me, and perhaps also with the engineer, and actually assemble the innovation while I am present.