The ethos is rather strong . The old picture also add words of baby . It cleared but the reader may not understand that finally, the mother had an abortion or not. So in my picture the text to reflect feeling of the readers as well. However, the article of the author’s good.
The ethos is strong because I add girl’s picture in old picture, that make the audience understand the situation in a more positive way. Before I add girl’s picture, the audience will guess the man may jump down for suicide, but I add which in the old picture, the audience will have thought that contradict themselves. They may think the man don’t jump down, or do. But I add the girl’s picture made this picture have positive meaning. This issue in the picture may form the author's experience or is just a reflection society. However this picture can give a great reason.