Spain’s Exceltur organization changed the predicted growth rate of the tourism sector from 3.4 to3.8% (Paragraph I)
Tourism is one of the most profitable activities and creates around 89,000 new jobs. (Paragraph II)
Giving the information that supports the statement in paragraph II (Paragraph III)
Giving reasons why the Spanish tourism industry’s growing. (Paragraph IV)
Giving the statistic to support the statement (Paragraph V)
However (the following paragraphs are contrast to the previous paragraphs)
The average amount of money spending in the tourism sector is decreasing. The cheap tourism is not a sustainable policy for the tourism. The added value tourism needs to be created in Spain (Paragraph VI)
Exceltur expressed that the Government should be more solid and stable (Paragraph VII)
The prediction of the Exceltur about the cities where the tourism sector would be growing this year. (Paragraph VIII)