Underlength! Only 362 words! -Is this double-spaced! -Rewrite the thesis statement! -Revise transitional words; most of them are used incorrectly! -How come that your second draft contain more mistakes than the first one?
Underlength! Only 362 words!-Is this double-spaced!-Rewrite the thesis statement!-Revise transitional words; most of them are used incorrectly!-How come that your second draft contain more mistakes than the first one?