Maybe you got a exec / ende command problem on your system / VM.Do you use XP SP3?If the dll won't load then you can load it manually.Load your target in Olly open E map and choose inject module (you need Olly Advanced plugin to see this feature) and choose the dll.Open E map and now you should see the dll into.But all in all if you really have this exec / ende problem then the script will fail on any next position in the script where it used exec / ende commands.