This looks really good, but would need to be painted to win the design. There are also some elements that don't match the brief. The Lyquis farmer's weapon (guy on the ground) should match the one in the reference photo provided (home made scatter gun - not the same as the soldier's rifle). The background also needs to match the background in the reference pic provided (this is the same place, so the details you've added in the background don't quite work. The soldier and Lyquis farmer look good though. Thanks for the design.