first reader : Instead of reporting all results of water quality parameters in term of range, data can be shown as the average or median values with standard deviations for each parameters analyzed from all ponds. By using SPSS, authors should try to analyze the significant relations among water quality parameters analyzed as well as any significant difference in water samples collected from different ponds, or collected from different time of sampling. Authors should discuss in details of some points shown in the figures such as why different patterns of pH, phosphate, BOD, TKN, and metals were found in each pond, why BOD significantly decrease in the year 2012 comparing the other years.