The changes required are:
1. PLACE OF DELIVERY should be stated as PICT or KICT.
2. In DESCRIPTION OF PACKAGES AND GOODS please remove the entire description "ZERACH -----------FLAVOURS" and replace with:
"FIZZY JUICE DRINK 275 ML IN ASSORTED FLAVOURS"
The above is sufficient and satisfactory.
3. HS CODE: 2009.19
4. "C/DAYS FREE DET AT KARACHI" may please be amended to state:
" 14 DAYS DETENTION FREE AT PLACE OF DELIVERY"
The rest seems to be okay. I hope all above will be implemented by you.