Not bad, although you need to activate you GOALS (which you can do by going to EDIT PAGE on your home page)
You also need to make sure you mark your pieces so that only your patreons can see them. Right now, they are open viewable. When you submit a piece, go to the bar that says PUBLIC by default and click on it, Then select how much a patreon should pay to be able to see that work. You have it set up so that they pay by month, not by piece. So if you put all of your pieces at $8 patreons, then people will only have to pay $8 to see them all, they won't have to pay $24.