Before you share our discussion, read the description of the assignment in the Student Support Pack carefully and follow instructions.
Also, don't post a screenshot of your comment, they are very difficult to read and you need to read all the comments of your group-mates and react to them.
Finally, it's a DISCUSSION. Use English phrases that are appropriate for discussions. For example:
I completely agree with you because...
I don't think it's true. In fact...
I see what you mean. I think...
I get your point, but...
Etc.