It doesn't show the cuts and grooves which the client mentioned about, check the merchandising guide at 400% to understand this better - can we place them so that there's no confusion at the end of the printer when they share the artwork file with him?
Additionally, with this round of feedback, the key card creative has become very plain, is it possible to incorporate some elements from the discarded creative to this one? e.g. The moon and the stars or the good night blurb - on the wifi details side - the flip side?
Let's see which elements can be retained given the new space constraints.