Hi Meiji,
thanks a lot for the reworked storyboard, I have shared one more comment with you.
Please do me a favor: When I am asking you to please start working on the clean images and Animation, please do NOT create a reworked storyboard first. There were just 5 comments, which Peak could have easily incorporated during Animation. Let's don't waste time and start with the Animation here.
Thanks a lot and kind regards,