7. Variation of sentences
1 = little or no variation of sentences; monotonous use of sentence type. (length/ complexity).
2 = some variation of sentences. Sentences of varying length or type, but not varied effectively.
3 = effective variation of sentence length and type.
8. Coherence
1 = lack of coherence; i.e. mismatch between the thesis and the body; tangents
2 = occasional tangents; repetition
3 = every paragraph works to support the thesis; “linked” paragraphs