Argon 18 ( with Translation ) Good

Argon 18 ( with Translation )
Good point
1. Close up key selling points with full details description + technical info.as new model Ads
2. Clear and focus Bike position

Bad point
1. I don't like page break out the photos of bike into unequal section

Training Camp is coming soon
Good point
-I don't see anything interesting except the intention to promote their training camp for Co-Brands under the distributor Volando
- I see the five brands are promoted by Names whist the Cyclist represents the Logos

Bad point
1. What is true meaning go to Camp Training if this Ad really wants to convey?
2. Flat point of attention and background