My topic sentence about the Mae Won

My topic sentence about the Mae Wong Dam opposition
When the Mae Wong Dam was protested by Sueb Nakhasathien Foundation Association Secretary Mr. Sasin Chalerm Lap, he and many cooperative people remonstrated or opposed it by walking to Bangkok on September 22. At first I found it difficult to make good topic sentence writing. Eventually I got used to it. In the beginning Khun Veeravith selected the story about Mae Wong Dam that was talking on the current issue and we had the same idea. Later I determined to pick up it and after staring work and accomplished it for two hour. Then I acknowledged that he suggested us to create outline for our work it mainly consist of topic sentence and supported ideas and other things just like introduction and conclusion and we created our topic sentence by our opinions. He thought everyone in our group should send at least one topic sentence and assorted the topic that achieved our group assignment but I meditated that it was a time-consuming method. At last I decided to send my assignment first and everyone can reset it later if had a better essay.